10 - The Michigan Daily - Democratic National Convention Hit or Miss? Winners and Losers from Boston 0 Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday I II I Clinton Republicans have Ronald Reagan; Democrats have Bill Clinton. On Monday, the greatest living hero of the Democratic Party set Boston's Fleet Center afire as he delivered a speech that was simultaneously humorous yet serious. At the core of his speech was a crucially important task: to draw a clear line between Democrats and Republicans; to define the differences between Kerry and Bush. He did this, however, with a liberal dose of humor. Pointing out how he per- sonally benefited from the tax cuts, Clinton joked that "I thought I should send them a thank you note - until I real- ized they were sending you the bill." But 'Clinton's speech did more than just remind America of his tremendous con- versational charm, he was the first to emphasize the Convention's overriding theme: unity. Clinton showed that he could effectively contribute to his party, all while reaffirming his magnetic person- ality that has made him so endearing. Obeamaa The distinguished debutant from Illinois, Barack Obama, was the biggest winner of the week. The 34- year old state senator and U.S. Senate can- didate carved a wide niche for himself by delivering what was arguably the best speech given at the 2004 Convention. Proving himself a master of rhetoric, his repeated emphasis on the United States of America drew thunderous applause and reinforced the Convention's "one America" theme. More than any one per- son, Obama came across as genuine, a ris- ing star inspired by a unabiding faith in the American dream. So successful was his speech that by the next day, Boston and the Fleet Center were buzzing with specu- lation about a future White House bid. Shrton When you have little credibility to lose, you really can say whatev- er you want. On Wednesday, Al Sharpton threw Kerry staffers into a pan- icked frenzy when he went drastically off- script and launched a 24-minute tirade that riveted the Fleet Center audience. Drawing on his past experiences as a preacher, "Reverend Al" used a variety of historical examples to address the strug- gle for equal rights and explain African American loyalty to the Democratic Party. He won the most applause when he directly responded to President Bush's assertion that African American loyalty was misplaced: "Mr. President, in all due respect, Mr. President, read my lips: Our vote is not for sale." W INN...'...... . '... 1~s.... Jppw xr Key ' v4 6 Surprise, surprise - John Kerry won and accepted the Democratic nomination. Sarcasm aside, it is surprising how well Kerry addressed the Convention on Thursday night; many have stated that his acceptance speech was the best written, best deliv- ered address of his career. It was expect- ed that Kerry would captivate the Democratic loyalists inside the Fleet Center, but few anticipated that unde- cided voters and television viewers would be even slightly impressed. However Kerry's history as a speaker is less than spectacular, his last major speech, announcing his vice presiden- tial selection, was disastrously received. This time, however, many coveted "swing voters" responded favorably; a group of reporters from The Washington Post watched the speech with two dozen undecided voters and determined that "the Democrat clearly helped himself." TH IME DEMAh-CRTCCNETN Coreyof the DNCC I JA)SEW a SEW: e Jimmly Carter In all honesty, there were no losers on Monday night. Convention planners intentionally loaded the first night's line up with all the biggest stars in an -effort to create momentum. Therefore, when compared to superstars Al Gore, Bill Clinton and Sen. Hillary Clinton (D - NY.), the aging and soft-spoken Jimmy Carter was put at a disadvantage he could do little about. Surprisingly, his speech was one of the most strongly-worded of the Convention; he called America's cur- rent foreign policy a "virtually unbrokenj .series of mistakes and miscalculations." He painted the darkest picture of the Bush Administration, calling the policy of preemption "confused," and faulting its actions for costing America "its repu- tation as the world's most admired cham- pion of freedom and justice." While this rhetoric would surely have resonated well with the crowd inside the Fleet Center, energetic younger speakers overshad- owed it. Even though his criticisms of the Bush Administration were of the most passionate convictions, he was unable to -relay that passion to his audience. Unfortunately for Carter, his moving words fell by the wayside as he fell vic- tim to his own age and demeanor. : . 0.: ' w . :xr J r,.. C 0 'OSER Tessa Heinz Kerry Dull and duller. While Teresa might have a feisty side - telling a reporter to "shove it" earlier in the week - her speech on Tuesday might well have put the audience to sleep. Even though dedicated delegates heaped prais- es on Heinz Kerry, the fact remains: her speech was boring and pointless. Speaking at an excruciatingly slow pace, John Kerry's wife rambled aimlessly about a myriad of issues; it took her near- ly half a speech to even mention John Kerry. Her recollections of life in apartheid South Africa could have served as a platform to launch a statement on freedom and liberty; instead, Heinz Kerry delivered an oddly-worded message about taking a stand and then quickly moved on to a series of unrelated issues, including Peace Corps volunteers and space probes. Without direction or charisma, Heinz Kerry's appearance can be described as nothing short of disaster. ~L0SER| ;u i Edwards f everyone knows you as the cute guy with an even cuter smile, it's hard to be mean. When Edwards tried to come off as tough on national security and terrorism, all that pundits and observers could do was issue a patronizing "awww." While Edwards was able to provide hard-hitting rhetoric, he was unable to effectively reconcile it with his "nice guy" persona. More unfortunate, however, was that Edwards' speech failed to win approval from even the dedicated Democrats inside Boston's Fleet Center. To be fair, Edwards had a high standard to meet. Perhaps, his speech was not well-received because it failed to measure up to the powerful ora- tory in his "Two Americas" speech from the primaries. Arguably, if John Kerry had delivered a similar speech, there would not have been collective disap- pointment; Edwards was a victim of his own skill. es, John Kerry is also a loser. While he delivered a marvelously worded speech (thus, he's a win- ner), he failed to define a vision, set an agenda or say anything he hasn't been say- ing for months (thus, he's a loser). Entering into his most important speech of his career, pundits unanimously agreed that Kerry had to convey a sense of con- sistency amid accusations of being a "flip- flopper" and to better define his platform. While an acceptance speech is not sup- posed to be filled with the intricacies of policy, Kerry failed to offer more than sweeping, generic promises that he might not be able to keep. He vowed energy independence, even though complete independence from foreign oil is a mere fantasy. He also said he would stop the outsourcing of jobs - a virtual impossi- bility in a globalized economy where developing nations offer significantly cheaper labor. Voters were hoping for a chance to become better acquainted with the candidate's political views and instead they received more stories about Kerry's military past. Kerry missed a huge oppor- tunity by failing to refute accusations about his political stability on such a national stage. "Hto is"i rdcino alyOiin u osntrfetteopnoso h al dtra or. htscuts fFRS AE/al