Friday, September 111 1970 THE MICHIGAN DAILY Page Five Friday, September 11, 1970 THE MICHIGAN DAILY Page Five Marx in the b 0 0 k s Roger Garaudy, Marxism in the Twentieth Century, Scrih- ners, $5.95. By JOHN WIMSATT Marxism in the Twentieth Century is a rich, and at times, chaotic book designed to com- municate to the members of the World Communist Parties the need to rediscover the critical, scientific foundations of Marx- ist thought. Written in 1966, it, is also the beginning of a per- sonal rebellion which ended in the early months of 1970 with Garaudy's expulsion from h i s position of leadership within the French Communist Party. The b o o k is Garaudy's re- sponse to doubts w h i c h had been affecting h i m since the Russian invasion of Hungary in 1956. In particular, it marks a growing awareness of the dis- parity that exists between the historical objectives and goals of the World Communist Par- ties and their realization in practice. In 1966 it was clear to Garaudy that many of the Communist Parties no longer worked for the humanization of the relationships between men, and had fallen into a Marxist dogmatism which not only was a hindrance to the task of the comprehension of man's situa- tion but a 1 s o served as the ground for the brutalization of man. Thus t h e question Garaudy asks is this, How can the World Communist Parties overcome this dogmatism and creatively assume the type of historical initiative demonstrated by Len- in? The first and most obvious answer is that they must have a knowledge of the world in which they live. In short, they must know the problematic reality which presents itself to them: its trends and the structure of these trends. Garaudy argues t h a t three world historical facts qualify and condition all actions which, these Parties initiate. These are: the staggering developments of the sciences and technology; the build-up of socialism on the road to becoming a world-wide systenm; and the decolonization of two continents, Asia and Af- rica. Garaudy emphasizes t h e qualifications which arise- from these facts. 20th The development of the s ences and technology has f ally and permanently ma obsolete the claim to poss once and for all either t prime elements of reality of the first principles knowledge . . . our mod( method of knowledge is 'nc Cartesian': in every field substitutes dialectic for in ition. The development of; cialism in different geograj ical and historical conditio on the scale of several con nents, imposes correspor ingly the notion of a plural of 'models,' Just as the u versal process of decoloni tion, by liberating new sou es of human creation t h have long been denied a held back by colonialiE forces us to widen the ho zon of humanism t h a t 1 hitherto been regarded asi clusively western. As a means of countering growing inertia of t h e C munist Parties, Garaudy1 gests the appropriation of t areas of activity about wx Communists a r e particul unseeing, namely, tiory knowledge, ethics, religion, century: ci- art. In other words, precisely ; in- those spheres from which man ade receives his deepest and most ess subtle differiation and accom- the plishment. Toward this end, or Garaudy provides brief, illum- of inating reflections upon s u c h ern themes as cybernetics, struct- on- uralism, positivism, existential- it ism, revolution, the dialectical, tu- nature of religious faith, t h e so- trully revolutionary nature of ph- the Christian concept of love' ns, the essential relationship of nti- myth and labor, and the auton- nd- omy of art. ity Garaudy concludes his essay ni- with critiques on the Marxist za- philosophies of Sartre and Alt- rc- husser. He argues that the a t Marxism which -he describes is and neither, as subjectively oriented sm, as Sartre's nor as objectively ori- grounded as Althusser's. Again has Garaudy's critiques a r e brief ex- a n d presuppose a previous knowledge of the philosophies the he criticizes. But in the case of om- these two philosophers, a more sug- lengthy examination becomes hose imperative. This is especially' hich true of Sartre whose Critique of arly 'Dialectical Reason is by far the of greatest and m o s t significant and philosophical work produced by A haunting Some poetry. to keep around the house a Marxist, and which, with the publication of his second vol- ume, promises to bring about a r e v olutio n in philosophical thought comparable to that of Hegel and Marx. The book's weakness is that f o r political reasons Garaudy allows a promising materialist logic (grounded as it is in his three world historical facts) to become an idealist catalogue of philosophical' reflections afraid to speak the conclusions of his logic. If he were to develop this materialist logic, he would be committed not only to a criti- cal elucidation of the existing conceptions of the materialist horizons within which the In- ternational Communist Move- ment assumes its position but also he would have to demon- strate the necessity of his pro- posed reorientation through the presentation of numerous med- iations informed by a scientific knowledge of history, sociology, and psychology. And this would mean he would have to directly confront those dogmatic and brutal Stalinist realities he wishes to change. But in 1966 such a confrontation seemed ill- advised, for Garaudy still had hope in the possibility of change. Thus Garaudy tells us only part of the truth. He is silent about those things which frighten and disgust him; and it is this sil- ence which haunts his book and diminishes its value. For example, he continually urges the adoption of creative historical initiative in the tra- dition of Lenin without once specifying the content and form of this notion. And when he does enter- into a detailed ex- plication of a n o ti o n (as he d o e s in attempting to appro- plate a more subtle and differ- entiated notion of human exis- tence) he fails to consider such revolutionary thinkers as Ar- taud, Reich, and Freud. Indeed what is most disturbing about his notion of human existence is its essential austerity. This was in 1966. Since that time Garaudy has broken his silence and has made specific criticisms and proposals. In one of hi s latest books, Today's writers . . John Wlmsatt is working on a Master's degree in American Studies. Mary Baron, a poet herself, is a graduate student in the English department. published I a s t December in France u n d e r the title, "the Great Turning Point of Social- ism," Garaudy argues that what is needed to overcome the state of crisis pervading the in- ternational Communist move- m e n t is an "agonizing reap- praisal" pf Marxism's tradition- al goals and methods so as to make Communism relevant to the problems of a modern,-com- puterized society. Garaudy de- velops the idea that advanced industrialized societies 1 i k e France are producing a new so- ciety in which engineers, tech- nicians. and other scientific personnel a r e assuming great importance. Such people form, with the traditional working class, a "new historical bloc." His book was accused of "right- wing deviationism" and "anti- Sovietism," because it attempt- ed to "dilute" the working class and to diminish its importance. More recently, Garaudy was ousted from the Central Com- mittee and the Politburo of the French Communist Party a n d relegated to the rank and file, for his continued criticisms of t h e international Communist movement. His m o s t vigorous indictments have been directed against the Soviet Union for its invasion of Czechoslavia and its assistance in building electric power stations for a Greek gov- ernment that had tortured Com- idence munists. Garaudy has also crit- icized the Polish Communist Party for the sale of coal to Spain while Spanish miners were on strike. At a time whet the French Communist Party has pledged to maintain its traditional soli- darity with the Communist Party of Russia, Garaudy's po- sition was an embarassment and his removAl came after other methods of terror had failed. Currently, Garaudy's position comes to this. The Communist Party becomes tenable in con- temporary society only if it con- tinuously reexamines the ma- terial foundations of its thought and practice. So expressed, Gar- audy has affirmed Merleau- Ponty's notion of interrogation which is set forth in the philo- sopher's last word. The Visible and the Invisible. In terms of Marxist philosophy, this means that dialectic philosophy is un- derstood as a part of the ma- teriality of the world and must be subjected to an intensive interrogation lest it fall into a dogmatism which no longer comprehends the world of which it is a part. In terms of action, this means that the usual dia- lectic which occurs between the intentions of an action and its effects will fall under an inter- rogation bringing to bear his- torical, sociological, a n d psy- chological knowledge. Charles Edward Eaton, "On the Edge of the Knife," Abelard Schuman, $4.50. Erich Fried, "On Pain of See-, ing" Swallow, $4.95. Louis Ginsberg, "Morning in Spring," William Morrow and Co., $5.04 Derek Walcott, "The Gulf," Farrar, Straus and Giroux, $5.50. By MARY BARON Charles Eaton has been highly praised as a poet who can make poetry "as immediate as the news without descending into journalism." This is silly. No poet today can expect extra points for writing ,bout the twentieth century, u nd those poems of Mr. Eaton's which are most "immediate" are by far his worst. He is uneasy with his subject matter. The closer he gets to the minor events of life the More he feels compelled to tell us why he finds them worth writing about. The poems are overexplicated, their metaphors come with directions, "how to assemble and apply," and they end as more prose explanation than poem. In "The Parure," for example, the poet has just seen his old car in an auto- mobile Junkyard: Xt was like a quick look in a tinted mirror - How had a part of myself become encrusted and en- bedded In suoh public passions that were an aggregate of terror? The simile is interesting, but the unnecesary comment of the next lines deadens it. And the language of the last two lines is unbearable. The question, by the way, is not answered in the poem. To be fair, this is an ear- ly poem and an extreme ex- ample.* In the latter poems Mr. Eaton shows an increasing will- ingness to use metaphor as an acceptable if inexact way of getting his point across, but other problems remain. The' chief problem is Mr. Eaton's curious and almost Germanic syntax. He often ruins a good poem with lines which would be unacceptable in simple prose: Messy with his food, impos- sible to please, Arthritically rigid if too many he despises foregater The first line is fine, the sec- ond is awful, and Mr. 'Eaton does not seem to notice the dif- ference. Throughou~t the book, in fact, the language does not equal the conception. Some- times, however, Mr. Eaton can write controlled quiet lines that do just what they should do. This usually hapens when he is not talking about himself. My favorite poems all belong to a series of portraits in Part V; the people described are misfits, a mulatto woman, a femalo im- personator, a midget. In these poems Mr. Eaton is at his best. He has a good mind; 'he sees clearly; he writes it down well. Most important, he has the comprehension and restraint to avoid facile empathy with his subjects. From "The Imper- sonator": . .She is a door ajar Into the dressing rIohi where we see him Wriggling into the sheath like an erotic fish, His feet spread in the flippers of a tail. Thickly inade up and sIead with ambergris, The gill-hair of false eye- lashes attached, He pulls on long gray gloves smooth as eel skins. Then the massive tout'h is in the wig Which draws her up onto the dry land Of speculation. This is what Mr. Eaton can do when he gives us the text without the gloss. Erich Fried's work is difficult to talk about for two reasons. The poems are in translation. with no text of the original in- cluded, and many of them deal with the political state of mod- political aftermath. Often I have no idea what he is talking about; the place names, the dates, the people, mean nothing to me. They are not a part of my experience, and I do not have the connotations which would tie the poems together. They do not work for me, and they leave me questioning the point at which a "committed" poem ceases to be art and begins to be a broadside or a march- ing song. To bring the matter home, contemporary American poetry is full of war poems and of poems against the war; the first are poems, the second are political expresions.The differ- ence' should be noted. Louis Ginsberg is Allen Gins- berg's father; they have no lit- erary kinship. Louis writes in meter and in rhyme, and his subjects are incredibly genteel. He writes very badly. Or, the simplest level, the poems show the inexcusable flaws of bad metered verse: inversion for the sake of rhyme, insistat mono- tonous stress patterns, diction which would stand out as poetic anytime after Tennyson, ("Sud- denly sfaded that insane de- ceit!"). These are not, unfor- tunately, temporary lapses; they pervade the poetry. What seems to me his most serious "The teacher pounds for order in the class!" Allen Ginsberg's introduction to the book is interesting for its gsneral comments on the prob- lem of writing the (metered) poem for the ear, and for its peculiar comments on h i s father's work. He tries to justify his father's doings on the grounds that the poems reflect much that is universal, and that some. ("Night in Silver") come near to a "Pure tune imag- inable", whatever that is. The tune in question is as follows: And with a shining crystal All shingled is the shed; Each icicle shows in it A moon is tenanted. This strikes my ear as awk- ward and unimaginativ verse. As to the claim of universal- ity, Allen comments on t h e title poem, "morning in Spring", that "the ancient recollection of cosmic identity breaks through ...". The first section of the poem reads: One morning when I went downtown, I felt such sunlight capsize down The streets were glutted with more gold Than all my heart could ever hold. I thought a glory much like this Must have been poured from Genesis. I don't deny the "recollection", but I can't take this particular expression of it very seriously. Derek Walcott knows what he's doing; he's writing poems. There are poems in The Gulf which I find too long, a few I find uninteresting, but none is bad. Mr. Walcott's use of language ranges from good to excellent; he sometimes says the wrong thing, but he never says it clumsily. His percep- tions are unfamiliar and exact. This is partly due, I think, to his background. He is of Wst Indian and English descent and has lived in the United States. He seems not to feel at home in any of these places, and he talks of them all as being dif- ferent but not foreign, an un- usual perspective. In "T h e Train" the poet has gone to England, to find "Where was my randy white grandsire from?", and decides, "Like you, grandfather, I cannot changs places,/ I am half-home." Walcott seems to be able to write equally well in and out of meter, with or without rhyme; whatever the form, he is in con- trol. He works at it: Schizophrenic, wrenched by two styles, one a hacks hired prose, I earn my exile. I trudge this sickle, moonlit beach for miles, tan, burn to slough off self-love. Dialectical Reason is by far the To change your language you must change your life. What I find most impressive about this book is just this sense of labor. Even if a poem fails. there is evident effort and craft in the way it is worked out. I think "God Rest Ye Merry, Gentlemen," for example, fails. In the end it is too pat. But the first lines are impressive as col- loquial metered verse: Splitting from Jack Delaney's Sheridan Square, that winter night, stewed, seasoned in bourbon, And I find some of what is said in "Blues" embarrassing, but the movement of the lines is something to try for: Those five or six young guys hunched on the stoop that oven-hot summer night whistled me over. Nice and friendly. So, I stop. MacDougal or Christopher Street in chains of light. 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According to the book jacket, Mr. Fried holds a position in German lit- erary circles as an advocate of "poetry of commitment." He writes, in part at least, to achieve a political end. This raises all the problems of poetry as a didactic art, but it also raises more specific considera- tions on the poem and its audi- ence. Most of Mr. Fried's poems deal with the horrors of Nazi Germany and their social and problem, however, is that Mr. Ginsberg has very little to say. This is the; gentle poetry of keepsake albums, rarely more. It is largely concerned with sun, snow, rain, and their effect on the human psyehe, the highly predictable effect of rumina- tion and a poem. However there are some execeptions, most notably "Repeater's Class," in which: girls whose bodies are more wise than they Are floundering, bewildered, in themselves. I find these lines equal to much observation and comment in the work of W. C. Williams, but Williams can sustain this sort of thing, Ginsberg can't. 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