THE MICHIGAN DAILY Wednesdav February 25 1970 I poetry and prose generation' An attic theatre full of characters SUPPORT UNCENSORED TV Vii the Edge By BETSY SMITH In the recent Generation, the most successful moments are when pity and admiration have played no part in selection and the piece stands alone, felicit- ou..., without pretensions. The magazine bothers me when cop- ies of the famed, or the cast- offs of the famed, decorate the pages. First let me say t h a t this Generation is exciting to read. There ari enough moments when poems make it or one is caught by a painstaking border .design. Too often t h e photo- ra hs are facile, with , Joe Vaie's series and the old man by Bockoff as welcome excep- tionxs..The drawings by Wilt are very satisfying. Max Altekruse's .woodcuts energetic. But the prose isrqute inferior, and mars Generations general standard of some grasp of technique and some expression of idea in the medium used. -The. poetry is, to quote the ironically fitting title of t h e first poem, by Diana Miller, "On the Edge." There is something in most of the poems, a line, a word, but there are few whole p.oemrs. The good poets have a lyric line or some shock to of- fer - but the better the trick, the. more it is over-used. James Peter's repeated line, "and I fall Into tieing your shoes again" in "Donald's Shoes" ruins the del- icacy of the conception. Thom Gunn's animal imagery be- comes too heavy to withstand absurdity when, in "Three," the father is ,drying his loins" while the mother "lies back on the hot round stones." Ted Ber- rigan does improvistations at times, as in section 20: No lady dream around in any bad exposure absence of passion, principles, love. She murmurs is not genuine It shines ' .forth from the faces littered w i t h soup, cigarette butts, the heavy and the exquisitely concentrat- ed section 27: Two is a factor of one. Go on. Well, two means you, think & talk, & it means me, us talking, not thinking togeth- er, now, and suffering. but often the poem is merely "s elf-idulgent. The good poets have not been represented in their best guises. There, are, several psycholo- gical poetesses who tend to take ';either their traumas, or their interpretations of their trau- n.as, with too great seriousness. Anne Stevenson seems to have a preachy ,horror of her mundane life whi h drags her into apo- strophes to deify her fantasies. "O milky nourishment of horiz- ons / their v a g u e mammery "dugs." she 'wails plaintively from the desert in "The Sui- cide."- In "Lust of Sappho" she is a "thin, bitter" mother in "horror' of her daughter : who steals me, from everyone, everyone, SMargery Himel analyzes her relationship with her father "Heart- Attack") in terms of "loss"' and "guilt," learning to "to retain." Her idea is still ap- parent through the sketch of ~ the poem, and although it is a good idea, needs to be yet more shaped and purified - stripped of. jargon. While Diana Miller has the images to project her emotions, she has few clear con- -nections or syntheses. Her ear is fine, nevertheless: Mother cried -,When she told me how my rooms were; Empty. That my plants had dtied. The best poetry by far is by 'Robert Hayden and Nancy Wil- lard. Professor Hayden can be worshipful of raw, his imagery is rich and .dignified. "A Plague of Starlings" makes its point as if from a pulpit, 'Soledid" as if from a rug, yet in both the terseness and the finality .and the certainty of the statement, all Pre equally pure. Nancy Wil- lard's "Seeing and Making" is finely etched, like the Flemish artists she 'admires "whose eyes -comb / everything into lines..." The prose is so sparsely bear- able that the two good attempts are worth congratulation. The 'IN American Film Studies Feb. 25 - Wed. By JOHN ALLEN Arthur Miller's play, T h e Price, appearing in Ann Arbor under the auspices of the Uni- versity's Professional Theatre Program, comes to life part way through the first act: Joseph Buloff comes on stage. Whether or not his passion- ately exaggerated portrayal of an 89-year old Jewish dealer in second-hand, furniture would be distressing on a smaller stage is beside thepoint, at least for IAnn Arbor audiences. He fills up the crannies of Hill Auditor- ium with gusto-and if the re- sult borders bn slapstick it is nonetheless grandly theatrical, His Mr. Gregory Solomon speaks in broken English, but he moves in Yiddish, and one doesn't need a translator or binoculars to >catch every inflection. I mean, when's the last time it was worth the price of ad- mission just to watch a man cross his legs or peel a hard- boiled egg? Doubtless the writing of the character of Gregory' Solomon was great fun for Mr. Miller. I am not so sure about the other three characters in The Price. Victor and Esther Franz, the husband and wife whose busi- ness it is to dispose of the attic- ful of furniture that brings light to the eyes of Mr. Solo- mon, do not seem to be posses- sed of that mystic extra some- thing that the furniture ap- praiser is so abundantly blessed with. They are genuinely moving characters, about' whom it is possible, to care, but they are not quite characters about whom it is possible to cheer. Do not mistake: it is perhaps cause for cheer to find charac- ters for whom one can care, and The Price is a satisfying and well-constructed drama. Its t e 1l i n g commentary on the ghostly grudges and false ideals that haunt one's search for love and a meaningful life is en- cased in an appropriate setting and in a credible story. Yet there were moments when Victor Franz displayed more than enough self-pity to excuse the world from giving him any I ENDS WEDNESDAY additional. And his wife never achieves much more than an ineffectual bitchiness, B o t h characters are perhaps true-to- life, but that of itself does not infuse the stage with life; and one wonders - for a moment, now and then - if the Franzes aren't too intentionally "sym- bolic" of time-passing, we-grow- too-soon-old-and-too-late-smart, etc. Douglass Watson as Victor and Betty Miller as his wife turned in j performances that were solid and professional without being electric. Walter Franz, Victor's brother -played with power and direct- ness by Carle Bensen-is a more difficult role to assess. Too little is known, perhaps, of the silence that has existed between the two brothers for so many years. Walter Franz, in any case, has the unenviable dramatic task of being a catalyst whose own ele- ments are not clearly defined in the course of the action. Pos- sibly-and I say it sincerely-I missed something. It is pleasing to report that for once a road-show of this kind has a set that does not look like it was delivered by air-lift and assembled with a bulldozer. Robert T. Williams is respon- sible for its design, which can be described as early attic. Director for this company of The Price is Joseph Anthony, whose pacing of the play is sit- isfactory, but who seems now and then to be too intent on using all the stage space, simply because it's there. His reading of Miller is not disappointing. The outstanding pleasure of the evening, however, remains Mr. Buloff's rickety antique of a second-hand furniture man. That plus Mr. Miller's play. ii If you're CHICKEN: Then don't join the DAILY Groove Tube is under- ground TV. It's what TV could be without censors and sponsors. " Come prepared to laugh a lot. . .and blush a little but come Presented by KENNETH N. 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The most consist- ant attempts are Kathy Edel- man's "Beth's Story" and Nancy Jackson's "$1.80 A Shot," but even these are flawed, the one by a sharp break in style be- tween the beginning a n d the rest of the story; the other by too exjlicit an explanation of t h e person's burden of guilt. Nancy Jackson handles male persona with a cleverness which leads one to wonder if she wouldn't excell with a less art- ful disguise. The Generation is highly am- bitious this issue, and like all ambitious projects it announces with gusto its manifold limita- tions. But for the discerning reader, his acts of criticism on such a project may be as stimu- lating as a response to some perfect whole. BACH CLUB presents PETER GRIFFITH playing works of Bach and other composers on guitar Refreshments and FUN afterwards WED., FEB. 25-8 P.M. 1236 Washtenow (at S. Forest near S. University) EVERYONE WELCOME! 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